Media Language- C
Conventions- B
Creativity- B
Attention to Detail- B
Technical Proficiency- B
2. Positive comments:
cinematography?- Good Variety and angles of shots
mise en scene?- Good setting, natural
lighting?- Good use of natural lighting
sound?- Good, clear sounds of birds
conventions? matching audience?- Animals for an animal documentary
3. Constructive Criticism:
cinematography?- Sometimes woobly, shaking, more angles
mise en scene?- Show the environment/setting more
lighting?- Need bettering lighting at night
sound?- Disruption in sound, dont just use internal mic, use external as well
conventions? matching audience?- Don't shoot in urban environment
4. Suggestions and Ideas:
What else would you (or the target audience) like to see in this production? (scenes? sequences?)- More varitety of animals
Suggestions for post-production/editing (music? voiceover? cutaways? montage? cross cutting? titles? slo-mo?)- Use voiceover, maybe follow a particular animal, construct a narrative, sequence
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